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Based on the survey, we found that Homesickness problem is really common problem that
most international student faced with. International student found that there
are many different things between their home country and Melbourne especially
traditional food that most of them could not find the same taste as their
hometown. In this post, three main tips of dealing with homesickness will be
described such as avoiding spending too much time at your room, learning
somethings new and positive thinking.
First
of all, it might be tempting to
treat of your room as your own little safe haven, however staying in too
much will only serve to make you feel worse. Isolating yourself will make
your feelings more intense, as you will spend even more time pondering on what
you miss about home. Trying to keep yourself busy by taking part in social
activities, studying at the library rather than in your room, getting a part
time job or even trying out some extracurricular activities. From this point of
view, it is suggested that international student should not just spend your too
much time at your own, but you should try to find something more interested to
cut down your feeling.
Secondly,
learning somethings new is another solution that can make international students
reduce feeling of homesickness too. For example, they can try to expose
themselves with somethings that they never did before. Sometime, learning
cooking your own food is also interested things to do. Maybe you can try to
cook traditional food from your own country by asking your mother or searching
from internet. Those things could help international students forget about
missing their home for a while too.
The last solution
that is essentials for international students to avoiding homesickness feeling
is being positive or having positive thinking. Of course, it can be easier said
than done, but being positive and having positive thinking are really important
for you to combat homesickness in a major way. Staying positive also makes you
a pleasure to be around, so you'll probably find it much easier to make new
friends (which also helps to keep homesickness at bay).
In conclusion, there were three significant solutions for international students to solve with their homesickness feeling: avoiding spending too much time at your room, learning somethings new and positive thinking. Firstly, you should try to be more active outside your room rather than just spend your too much time at your room since you can make you more depress and missing what you used to have. Another thing is learning somethings new because it could help you forget your missing feeling because you have other things that you have more attention. Lastly, being positive is really effectiveness solutions for homesickness because it could help you think much better and also help you easier to make new friends. It is highly recommended all international students should try one of our solutions to reduce their missing feeling and hopefully that they don't choose emotional feeling or isolating themselves as solution of homesickness problem.
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Overall your concluding paragraph is good and includes some good ideas
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